I need help translating my poem to vietnamese :)

[Sherly]

Hi, I am trying to translate my poem into vietnamese by myself.. but i need help. =/.. I really appreciate your help =]
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Happiness...
Where do i find this so called "Happiness"...
How do i know if it is "Happiness"...

As far as I know...
It's is something very hard to find...
But when you find it...
You feel like you can do anything...
You can break through any limits...

It brings more life into the person that you already are...
You feel more lively...
Ready to take on the world...
Not letting anything stop you...

How do I know this...
It's because Ive experienced it before...
I had grip of it...
I held it in my hands...
But then I let it slip...
And I couldn't ever get a hold of it again...

But that doesnt stop me from what I do...
There is so many things that I have accomplished even without it...
It makes it 10 times harder...
But you know it was worth the hard work when it has been accomplished...
Many times I have almost given up...
But I realized a lot...
And so I still here...
Doing what I still do...

Happiness is something that I have been searching for...
And I have been searching for a long time...
Many times I believe I found it...
But I was wrong...
Im still lost...
Searching for something that cant be found...
Its like being in an empty room...
And you are searching for something but there is nothing there...

One day...
I know one day...
I will find this happiness again...
And then I will be unstoppable...
I will show the world what I can do...
I just need to find my Happiness...

-Sherly

[vietnamese4u]

kho dich qua ! so hard to translate...

Niềm hạnh phúc...
Em có thể tìm nơi đâu niềm hạnh phúc
Và làm sao em biết thế nào là niềm hạnh phúc hả anh

Em chỉ biết rằng
Đó là thứ mơ hồ khó tìm thấy được
Nhưng khi đã tìm thấy
Ta cảm thấy dường như ta có thể làm mọi chuyện
Ta có thể vượt qua mọi giới hạn của bản thân
...

[dethuong_x0x]

It will be much better, if it have some rhyme.

[truelove]

Hi, I am trying to translate my poem into vietnamese by myself.. but i need help. =/.. I really appreciate your help =]
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Happiness...
Where do i find this so called "Happiness"...
How do i know if it is "Happiness"...

As far as I know...
It's is something very hard to find...
But when you find it...
You feel like you can do anything...
You can break through any limits...

....

-Sherly

Hic, I tried to translate it into Vietnamese but it seems so....awkward. My words, I mean.
My try [02 first cantos]

Happiness...
Hạnh phúc....
Where do i find this so called "Happiness"...
Tìm nơi đâu cái gọi là hạnh phúc
How do i know if it is "Happiness"...
Để làm sao hạnh phúc được định hình

As far as I know...
Đến bây giờ tôi vẫn chỉ đinh ninh
It's is something very hard to find...
Nó thật khó để tìm ra hạnh phúc
But when you find it...
Nhưng cái lúc bạn tìm ra được nó
You feel like you can do anything...
Bạn tưởng như làm được cả mọi điều
You can break through any limits...
Giới hạn nào ngăn được bạn phiêu diêu [hờ hờ, cái này dịch đại nè]

[Sherly]

Sorry, for some reason my poetry wouldnt show all of it.. >.< I been trying to translate it but im not sure of my viet words lol.. i would like to check it with you guys. tell me how you think.. i know its abit depressing.. I just broke up recently
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Happiness. Where do i find this so called "Happiness". How do i know if it is "Happiness". As far as I know. It's is something very hard to find. But when you find it. You feel like you can do anything. You can break through any limits.

It brings more life into the person that you already are. You feel more lively. Ready to take on the world. Not letting anything stop you. How do I know this. It's because Ive experienced it before. I had grip of it. I held it in my hands. But then I let it slip. And I couldn't ever get a hold of it again.

But that doesnt stop me from what I do. There is so many things that I have accomplished even without it. It makes it 10 times harder. But you know it was worth the hard work when it has been accomplished. Many times I have almost given up. But I realized a lot. And so I still here. Doing what I still do. Happiness is something that I have been searching for. And I have been searching for a long time. Many times I believe I found it. But I was wrong.
Im still lost. Searching for something that cant be found. Its like being in an empty room. And you are searching for something but there is nothing there.

One day. I know one day. I will find this happiness again. And then I will be unstoppable. I will show the world what I can do. I just need to find my Happiness...

-sherly