Help with Vietnamese Message...

[lindal24]

English tranlsation:
With wishes that God will lead you into everlasting happiness.

Vietnamese translation:
Với những lòng mong muốn Chúa trời đó sẽ dẫn dắt bạn vào trong hạnh phúc vĩnh cửu.

Can someone please correct this, if necessary, so that it flows with the Vietnamese language?

Thanks!

[LtDra]

English tranlsation:
With wishes that God will lead you into everlasting happiness.

Vietnamese translation:
Với những lòng mong muốn rằng Chúa trời đó sẽ dẫn dắt bạn vào trong hạnh phúc vĩnh cửu.

Can someone please correct this, if necessary, so that it flows with the Vietnamese language?

Thanks!

Very good, but the "đó" you don't want it there! You may like to put "rằng" in front of "chúa trời" But in VietNamese without those both is better.

[MANH NGUYEN]

English tranlsation:
With wishes that God will lead you into everlasting happiness.

Vietnamese translation:
Với những lòng mong muốn Chúa trời đó sẽ dẫn dắt bạn vào trong hạnh phúc vĩnh cửu.

Can someone please correct this, if necessary, so that it flows with the Vietnamese language?

Thanks!

Cầu mong ơn Đức Chúa Trời sẽ dẫn dắt anh (bạn) vào con đường hạnh phúc vĩnh cữu.