paragraph about a trip

[wewa]

My teacher told me write a paragraph to describe a my trip . Because My English is not very well so I just write a small and easy paragraph But I think that has many misstate . If which sentences were not good you could fix to easy to translate . Thanks.

Tuần trước tôi và các bạn tôi đã có một chuyến đi thú vị .Chúng tôi đã đi leo núi tại tỉnh Bà Rịa . Chúng tôi xuất phát từ 7 giờ sáng vì quãng đường không xa cho nên chúng tôi đi bằng xe máy .Khoảng 8 giờ chúng tôi tới nơi và bắt đầu lên núi .Quãng đường khá dài và khó đi nên chúng tôi cảm thấy rất mệt nhưng mọi người rất vui vẻ và thích thú . Khi đi lên cao chúng tôi bắt gặp một con suối và chúng tôi quyết định dừng chân tại đó . Phong cảnh tại đó thật tuyệt vời , chung quanh là rất nhiều cây cối bên dưới suối chảy mát lạnh . Bọn con trai chúng tôi ăn vội một chút thức ăn và sau đó lao xuống suối ngay lập tức . Nước thật mát lạnh, cảm giác thật kì diệu ...Khi ra về , chúng tôi quýêt định sẽ sớm quay lại nơi đây .Tôi hi vọng ngày đó sẽ đến sớm .

I tried to translate .

I and my friends had a excited trip last week .We went mountaineering at Ba Ria town .We started at 7 o'clock . Because distance is short so we decided to travel by motorbike .We came and started to climb mountain at 8 AM .Because the street is too long and hard to go so we were very tired but every body were enjoy and excited . When we climbed a time . We saw a nice stream and we decided to stay at there. There is a beautiful place , There have a lot of trees around below The stream is very cool . All of boy of we ate some food and then we dived the stream immediately .stream's water is very cool and fresh That is very wonderful ...When we came back home , we decided to come there soon again .I hope the day will come soon .

[MANH NGUYEN]

I and my friends had a excited trip last week .
My friends and I had a good trip last week.
We went mountaineering at Ba Ria town .
We climbed a mountain at Ba Ria, Vung Tau Province.
We started at 7 o'clock .
We departed at............
Because distance is short so we decided to travel by motorbike .
We decided to travel by motobikes because it was only a short trip.
We came and started to climb mountain at 8 AM .
We arrirred to the foot of the mountain and started climbing at 08:00AM
Because the street is too long and hard to go so we were very tired but every body were enjoy and excited .
It was a long and rough way to the top of the mountain..... we became tired quickly but everybody enjoyed the trip very much.
When we climbed a time . We saw a nice stream and we decided to stay at there.
On the way up we ran into a stream and we decided to stop there....
There is a beautiful place , There have a lot of trees around below
It was a beautiful place with a lot of trees around and below....
The stream is very cool .
The water of the stream was very cool.
All of boy of we ate some food and then we dived thestream immediately .
We all ate lunch and swimming in the stream.
stream's water is very cool and fresh That is very wonderful ...
The water of the stream was very cool and fresh. It was wonderful...
When we came back home , we decided to come there soon again .I hope the day will come soon .
When we got home, we wished we could go back to that place again someday.
I hope the day will come soon.

[wewa]

thanks . Hix
write a paragraph is very difficult >.<

[Paddy]

thanks . Hix
write a paragraph is very difficult >.<

vạn sự khởi đầu nan. Từ từ rồi sẽ thấy dễ hơn.

Dùng chữ hike-hiking nếu chỉ đi leo núi ngắm cảnh thôi.

Chữ mountaineer thường dùng cho leo núi mà dùng dây, móc sắt, ròng rọc, vv. như trong phim Cliffhanger chẳng hạn.

[dethuong_x0x]

My teacher told me write a paragraph to describe a my trip . Because My English is not very well so I just write a small and easy paragraph But I think that has many misstate . If which sentences were not good you could fix to easy to translate . Thanks.
==> My teacher told me to write a paragraph about my trip. Because my English is not very good, I just write a short and easy paragraph. But I think that I will make many mistakes. If some sentences are not clear, can you fix them to understand easily? Thanks!

I tried to translate .

I and my friends had a excited trip last week .We went mountaineering at Ba Ria town .We started at 7 o'clock . Because distance is short so we decided to travel by motorbike .We came and started to climb mountain at 8 AM .Because the street is too long and hard to go so we were very tired but every body were enjoy and excited . When we climbed a time . We saw a nice stream and we decided to stay at there. There is a beautiful place , There have a lot of trees around below The stream is very cool . All of boy of we ate some food and then we dived the stream immediately .stream's water is very cool and fresh That is very wonderful ...When we came back home , we decided to come there soon again .I hope the day will come soon .

.....................Correct mine correction if any mistakes please!

[wewa]

I don't know , when we use "adj" or "adv" (ly với ko ly)? help me ...
_adj : behind noun , tobe
_adv: nomal verb
That right ?

[Paddy]

I don't know , when we use "adj" or "adv" (ly với ko ly)? help me ...
_adj : behind noun , tobe
_adv: nomal verb
That right ?

adjective là tĩnh từ đứng trước danh từ: big house, red dog

Adverb là trạng từ dùng để bổ nghĩa cho động từ, tĩnh từ hoặc một trạng tự khác. I did well on my exam. He walks very fast.

[wewa]

He walks very fast

Fast là tính từ mà . Ý em là kiểu beautiful với beautufully ấy .
She is beautiful girl .
She sang beautifully .
right ?

[MANH NGUYEN]

Fast là tính từ mà . Ý em là kiểu beautiful với beautufully ấy .
She is beautiful girl .
She sang beautifully .
right ?

Lưu ý và đọc kỹ: FAST vừa là adj. vừa là adv.; nhớ đọc lại những chỉ dẩn của Paddy.
fast1 (făst)
adj. fast·er, fast·est


1. Acting, moving, or capable of acting or moving quickly; swift.
adv. faster, fastest

1. In a secure manner; tightly: hold fast.
2. To a sound degree; deeply: fast asleep.
3. In a rapid manner; quickly.

Phần này trích dẫn tư Heritage Dict.
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