Please ! help me check the thesis statement !
Hi there,
anyone who can help me check my thesis statement ? is it right or wrong. Thank you so much.
the topic is : compare your country to an english speaking country
the thesis statement: there are some of differences between Canada and Vietnam about culture: languages, seasons and customs of clothing.
Last edited by kutron; 01-13-2009 at 08:47 AM.
The content is fine, but I think you should change the word 'seasons' (you meant weather, didnt you?)Originally Posted by kutron
With this thesis statement, you will write about 3 differences, language, weather, and traditional clothing.
Last edited by dethuong_x0x; 01-13-2009 at 09:44 AM.
Nhất tự vi sư , bán tự vi sư
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1st Version:
Anyone who teaches me one word - even half a word - is still my teacher.
2nd Version:
Even he who teaches me the smallest bit can still be called my teacher
Please correct my grammar as you see fit. Much appreciated!
thank you for your answer
this is my correct thesis statement. what do you think ?
there are some of differences between Canada and Vietnam about culture: languages, wealthers and traditional of clothing.
is it ok ?
Weather doesnt come with 's'. Traditional is adjective, so you dont need 'of' goes after traditional.
Nhất tự vi sư , bán tự vi sư
---
1st Version:
Anyone who teaches me one word - even half a word - is still my teacher.
2nd Version:
Even he who teaches me the smallest bit can still be called my teacher
Please correct my grammar as you see fit. Much appreciated!
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