Please help asap

[cofusedlove]

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[MANH NGUYEN]

my friends uncle passed away, can someone help me translate this message to him

I am sincerely sorry for your families loss. I know that your uncle is in heaven now resting in paradise with God. I wll keep you and your family in my prayers during this difficult time. I wish you and your family peace.

tuyet

Tôi thành thật chia buồn cùng gia đình. Tôi được biết rằng Bác/Chú/Cậu của bạn đã qui tiên và hiện đang yên nghỉ ở cỏi trên cùng với Chúa/Thượng Đế. Tôi sẽ cầu nguyện cho bạn cùng gia đình trong lúc khó khăn này. Tôi cầu mong bạn cùng gia đình được bình an.

[NamTBHP]

Thay tôi = mình/tớ là xong.
You could use "mình/tớ" instead of "tôi" for showing your sympathy.

[MANH NGUYEN]

i am affraid that if i write toi when communicating with them the parents will feel insulted as if I am acting as if i am there equal. is there a better way to refer to myself than toi?

thanks in advance

It depends on whom you write to.

To your friend: I = Toi, em (female), anh (male)
To your friend's parents: I = Chau or Con

I believe that you can use the pronoun "toi" to anybody. That has nothing to do with insult when you have not mastered the language.