help with love poem

[Winston]

I want to send my girlfriend a love poem in tieng viet but its so difficult to get the right meaning, can anyone kindly help with the below-mentioned:



To proclaim that I love her
Is so easy to say
And for that, I will tell her
In my own special way

Through meaningful words
And the warmth of my touch
Through these nights of romance
She deserves so much

She's trapped in my heart
She's always on my mind
She gives me her love
Our hearts intertwine

For the woman I love
I have searched my whole life
But I know that I have found her
Because I will make her my wife

[Winston]

is it possible to translate this poem to Tieng Viet? or could it be that the meaning will be lost if translated...... awaiting your advise

[dethuong_x0x]

I want to send my girlfriend a love poem in tieng viet but its so difficult to get the right meaning, can anyone kindly help with the below-mentioned:



To proclaim that I love her
Is so easy to say
And for that, I will tell her
In my own special way

Through meaningful words
And the warmth of my touch
Through these nights of romance
She deserves so much

She's trapped in my heart
She's always on my mind
She gives me her love
Our hearts intertwine

For the woman I love
I have searched my whole life
But I know that I have found her
Because I will make her my wife

With my knowledge, this is quite hard to translate this poem.

[LtDra]

I want to send my girlfriend a love poem in tieng viet but its so difficult to get the right meaning, can anyone kindly help with the below-mentioned:



To proclaim that I love her
Is so easy to say
And for that, I will tell her
In my own special way

Through meaningful words
And the warmth of my touch
Through these nights of romance
She deserves so much

She's trapped in my heart
She's always on my mind
She gives me her love
Our hearts intertwine

For the woman I love
I have searched my whole life
But I know that I have found her
Because I will make her my wife

My try,


Muốn thổ lộ tình anh yêu em đó
Dễ lắm không đôi điều muốn tỏ
Và vì yêu, anh sẽ ráng làm liều
Nói riêng em bằng đặc ngữ tim yêu.


Bằng những lời yêu đầy ấp chứa chan
và đôi vòng tay ấm áp nồng nàn
Bằng tất cả những đêm yêu lãng mạn
Đến cho em, em thật là xứng đáng

Bẫy tim anh đã bắt giữ cô nàng
Dòng tư tưởng luôn có em lãng vãng
Em ban anh tình yêu em yêu dấu
Tim chúng mình hòa quyện quấn quít nhau

Với riêng em hỡi người tôi yêu dấu
Anh đã đi tìm ròng rã bấy lâu.
Nhưng anh biết anh đã tìm được em
Bởi vì anh chắc chắn sẽ cưới em.

[Winston]

thank you LtDra !! I am very thankful for your help in such a long translation.

But I am not sure I made an impression or not because she straightaway sent me one long sms too:

Hoi tinh yeu la anh sao bang. vang anh roi lam sao em vui duoc. anh la anh sao bang tre put cuoc doi em. em la ngoi sao don le nen gap anh la le song doi em

I hope its a good reply....anyone can help? I can't wait to go Vietnam soon so that its much easier to communicate because she can speak some chinese with me.

[LtDra]

thank you LtDra !! I am very thankful for your help in such a long translation.

But I am not sure I made an impression or not because she straightaway sent me one long sms too:

Hoi tinh yeu la anh sao bang. vang anh roi lam sao em vui duoc. anh la anh sao bang tre put cuoc doi em. em la ngoi sao don le nen gap anh la le song doi em

I hope its a good reply....anyone can help? I can't wait to go Vietnam soon so that its much easier to communicate because she can speak some chinese with me.

uh oh ... I can't do the poetry in English. It is a good reply,

Hỡi tình yêu là ánh sao băng
Oh, love is a glare of shooting star
Vắng anh rồi làm sao em vui được
without you there is nothing fun
Anh là ánh sao băng trẽ (put) đặt để cuộc đời em
You are the glare of star (bright up) all my life
Em là ngôi sao đơn lẻ nên gặp anh là lẽ sống của đời em.
I am a lonely star have found you as a path of my life.

[Winston]

Thanks LtDra !!

[dethuong_x0x]

Ltdra is so genius!