Traicocxanh,
You said that your English can be corrected if mistake found. I'd like to do so with your signature.The original one reads:
If I have to make a mistake when I write in English language, you advise me consecutive, right! If not I din't known where I'm wrong
Nếu tôi có viết tiếng Anh sai chỗ nào, chỉ tôi liền nhé! Chứ không ấy thì tôi chả biết tôi sai nữa!
It should only read:
If anyone finds mistakes in my English writing, please point it out. I 'm greatly
appreciated.