Please help me to improve my translation

[Phong Lan]

Finally I got what I'm looking for. You are all very helpful. Thank you vietnamese4u, MANH NGUYEN, justdoit and especially Tricky so much :X.

[Tanyenbai]

“I juices my rice in the bowl with tears
How come thy jerked it out my dear?”
:-)

[Paddy]

“I juices my rice in the bowl with tears
How come thy jerked it out my dear?”
:-)

Thou chứ đâu phải thy (=my).

[LtDra]

“I juices my rice in the bowl with tears
How come thy jerked it out my dear?”
:-)

Cause I ain't want to live with the fear
That someday I'll got stroke in ur tears

[Tanyenbai]

Cause I ain't want to live with the fear
That someday I'll got stroke in ur tears

Now that beer in and water out
Nothing left and only words spoken aloud.

[Tanyenbai]

Thou chứ đâu phải thy (=my).

thank you mr. Thóc. It should be "thee"

[Paddy]

thank you mr. Thóc. It should be "thee"

Bác lộn nữa rồi, thee là túc từ mà, chứ đâu phải chủ từ.