need help about "writing skills"!!!

[camdorac_likom]

Mình có bài tập này muốn nhờ các bạn nhé:
Rewrite the following sentences. Replace inexact or overused words in with more specific, vivid ones.
1/The moon shone over the lonely town.
2/The visitors were quite surprised by the tall buildings in our city.
3/ Fed by a strong wind, the noisy fire burned one home after another.
4/ The angry crowd moved closer and closer to the speaker.
5/ Slowly , the tired stranger came out of the ugly old house

Nhân tiện mình hỏi có bạn nào có TỪ ĐIỂN ĐỒNG NGHĨA ( thesaurus ) - dùng dc trên máy tính có thể gửi cho mình dc ko?
thanks

[Paddy]

Mình có bài tập này muốn nhờ các bạn nhé:
Rewrite the following sentences. Replace inexact or overused words in with more specific, vivid ones.
1/The moon shone over the lonely town.
2/The visitors were quite surprised by the tall buildings in our city.
3/ Fed by a strong wind, the noisy fire burned one home after another.
4/ The angry crowd moved closer and closer to the speaker.
5/ Slowly , the tired stranger came out of the ugly old house

Nhân tiện mình hỏi có bạn nào có TỪ ĐIỂN ĐỒNG NGHĨA ( thesaurus ) - dùng dc trên máy tính có thể gửi cho mình dc ko?
thanks

1. The moon dimly shone over a secluded town.

2. The visitors were mesmerized by the skyscrapers in our city.

3. Fed by gusty wind, the ravaging fire engulfed one home after another.

4. The agitated crowed inched closer to the speaker.

5. Slowly, the exhausted stranger came out of the dilapidated house.

[camdorac_likom]

Mình có đoạn thơ thế này:

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy windand downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep....
Và trong mấy câu hỏi về bài thơ, thì có mấy câu tớ ko biết trả lời thế nào:
Why might the speaker care that the owner will not see "this"(" see me stopping here")?

What mood do three words ( lovely, dark and deep ) create? What might the woods symbolize?

[Paddy]

Mình có đoạn thơ thế này:

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound's the sweep
Of easy windand downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep....
Và trong mấy câu hỏi về bài thơ, thì có mấy câu tớ ko biết trả lời thế nào:
Why might the speaker care that the owner will not see "this"(" see me stopping here")?

What mood do three words ( lovely, dark and deep ) create? What might the woods symbolize?

The poem does not say anything about the speaker "I" who might care about being seen by the owner of the woods. It simply states that the owner lived in the village and would not be able to see "him/her" riding through the woods.

As for symbolization of the woods, check out this website:

http://www.sparknotes.com/poetry/frost/section10.rhtml

[hdungbeat]

1. The moon dimly shone over a secluded town.

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Ngoài từ shine ra còn từ nào có thể dùng trong câu này không bác Paddy?

[Paddy]

Ngoài từ shine ra còn từ nào có thể dùng trong câu này không bác Paddy?

Nhiều chữ đồng nghĩa lắm nhưng dùng tùy theo ý mình muốn diễn tả ánh trăng làm sao.

glimmer, gleam, glisten, glow, illuminate, sparkle, irradiate, etc.

Coi http://thesaurus.reference.com/browse/shine

[camdorac_likom]

mình thay shine on bằng gaze upon được ko nhỉ

[Paddy]

mình thay shine on bằng gaze upon được ko nhỉ

Gaze là nhìn (soi mói, chòng chọc) còn gaze upon là nhìn [lên trên] cái gì, người nào. Chữ này hoàn toàn khác nghĩa với shine on.

[camdorac_likom]

De bai cho mot cai bieu do, yeu cau phan tich bang tieng Anh.
Cứ theo mẫu mà làm thì có:
The chart shows the energy consumption in Highland in 2000. As can be seen, the total energy consumption was 117 tons. Petroleum made up the largest amount of this figure( 57 million tons ). This was followed by the consumption of coal ( 40 million tons ). Nuclear and Hydroelectricity made up the smallest amount of energy consumption ( 20 million tons ).
Tiếp tục phân tích sản luợng năng lượng tiêu thụ trong năm 2005, lại tương tự như phần mẫu:
The chart shows the energy consumption in Highland in 2005. As can be seen, the total energy consumption was 170 tons. Nuclear and Hydroelectricity made up the largest amount of this figure( 75 million tons ). This was followed by the consumption of Petroleum( 50 million tons ). Coal made up the smallest amount of energy consumption ( 45 million tons )

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