Help me!!! Writing -Compare & Contrast Essay Topic

[caroly3k]

Giup minh voi cac ban oi, minh dang kho khan vuong ban ve cai essay phai viet 400-600 tu, nhung y nghi trong dau minh chang biet viet the nao, thuong thi minh chi viet 1 doan ngan thoi, nay phai viet doan dai, ma y tuong cua bai essay nay minh chang co ty nao, vay ban nao co the giup minh viet bai essay nay nha or co the goi y cho minh cung duoc. Cam on cac ban truoc nha.
compare your life today in the 21st Century (now), to life in the 1940's or 1950's (your grandparents' generation)
Use the compare & contrast worksheets that you have been given to start preparing your essay.

[Paddy]

Giup minh voi cac ban oi, minh dang kho khan vuong ban ve cai essay phai viet 400-600 tu, nhung y nghi trong dau minh chang biet viet the nao, thuong thi minh chi viet 1 doan ngan thoi, nay phai viet doan dai, ma y tuong cua bai essay nay minh chang co ty nao, vay ban nao co the giup minh viet bai essay nay nha or co the goi y cho minh cung duoc. Cam on cac ban truoc nha.
compare your life today in the 21st Century (now), to life in the 1940's or 1950's (your grandparents' generation)
Use the compare & contrast worksheets that you have been given to start preparing your essay.

Tớ không biết bạn có hiểu compare and contrast không cho nên nhắc lại cho biết.
Compare là so sánh 2 cái coi giống nhau cái gì.
Contrast là so sánh 2 cái coi khác nhau cái gì.

Viết về hai thế hệ thì so sánh cách nói chuyện, ăn uống, ăn mặc coi giống và khác nhau chỗ nào. Mỗi một chuyện đưa ra ba thí dụ giống và ba thí dụ khác. Vậy là thấy có ba đoạn văn rồi hoặc làm thành sáu đoạn văn luôn cho dễ đọc. Thêm mở đề và kết luận là thành 5 đoạn văn rồi (hay 8). 400 chữ là dư sức.

Viết thử đi chứ đừng ngồi suy nghĩ coi có rặn ra được 400 chữ là không bao giơ` viết được hết.

[caroly3k]

Recently, the life has changed significantly due to the change of the technologies around the world. From the 40s, 50s, the life seem difficult than in the 21st. Nowadays, people have more and more convenience than in the past when the development of technologies. There are a lot of similarities and differences between two period of time when compare it together.
The technologies had been changed significantly over 50 years and leads to the differences in the life. First of all, the entertainments between two generations are different remarkable. In the past 50 years, the ways that our parent generation do for relaxing after day-working is just simple. An illustration for the entertainment in the past generation is playing in the field where likely plays in team such as football, catch butterfly, sound a trumpet. In addition, entertainment’s equipment is too simple like go fishing, swimming. However, in the 21st centuries, the way those children entertain differently such as computer game.
One of the most important changes in the life considers two generation is the way of education.
Another different between two kinds of life is the peaces and war. In the past 50 years, there are a lot of wars between countries such as Vietnam War, China War. Therefore, the life in the past seem difficult than people in these days. People in the past 50 years was not enough food for survive. An example for this is famine in 1945 in Vietnam which is the caused of million death. However, people recently, have full of service that create the happiness. Money, food, service, travel are the factor that make the most significant differences between the old and new life.
The industries and agriculture in the past and recently are different when there were many impacts of the technologies. A clear example of the agriculture is the way people plant tree and harvest in the field. Recently, human activities are saving due to the use of machine when people cultivate. In fact, people recently seem lazier than people in the past when the help of the machine. However, the cultivation in the old generation was more difficult when activities in the field mainly happen by human activities.
Besides the differences consider revising two generation, there also exist a lot of similarities. Firstly, the culture of the communities is the most important element that human keeps from the past to now. Therefore, the most similarities consider revising two generation is the traditional culture in the communities. Even there are several changes which impact to the way people celebrate Events but the traditional feature will never lost due to the behaviors of people.
However, there also have a lot of feature that includes both differences and similarities. The educational systems from the past to now change significantly. However, the insight meaning of the education still is the same when people always want to have the perfect educational background. Young generation recently is one of the most clearly example for the above element. Young generation in the past and new always has a lot of ambitious determine for their future when they are very hard working.
Over the past 50 years, people life change significant due to a number of reasons regarding to the development in all aspect of the life such as technologies, intellectual, cultures or behaviors. There are a lot of different in the life of people in two generation. However, the traditional culture is one of the most significant and important of the life that people should keep in order to maintain a sustainability society for the future.

[NguoiVietOnAo]

Recently, the life has changed significantly due to the change of the technologies around the world. From the 40s, 50s, the life seem difficult than in the 21st. Nowadays, people have more and more convenience than in the past when the development of technologies. There are a lot of similarities and differences between two period of time when compare it together.
The technologies had been changed significantly over 50 years and leads to the differences in the life. First of all, the entertainments between two generations are different remarkable. In the past 50 years, the ways that our parent generation do for relaxing after day-working is just simple. An illustration for the entertainment in the past generation is playing in the field where likely plays in team such as football, catch butterfly, sound a trumpet. In addition, entertainment’s equipment is too simple like go fishing, swimming. However, in the 21st centuries, the way those children entertain differently such as computer game.
One of the most important changes in the life considers two generation is the way of education.
Another different between two kinds of life is the peaces and war. In the past 50 years, there are a lot of wars between countries such as Vietnam War, China War. Therefore, the life in the past seem difficult than people in these days. People in the past 50 years was not enough food for survive. An example for this is famine in 1945 in Vietnam which is the caused of million death. However, people recently, have full of service that create the happiness. Money, food, service, travel are the factor that make the most significant differences between the old and new life.
The industries and agriculture in the past and recently are different when there were many impacts of the technologies. A clear example of the agriculture is the way people plant tree and harvest in the field. Recently, human activities are saving due to the use of machine when people cultivate. In fact, people recently seem lazier than people in the past when the help of the machine. However, the cultivation in the old generation was more difficult when activities in the field mainly happen by human activities.
Besides the differences consider revising two generation, there also exist a lot of similarities. Firstly, the culture of the communities is the most important element that human keeps from the past to now. Therefore, the most similarities consider revising two generation is the traditional culture in the communities. Even there are several changes which impact to the way people celebrate Events but the traditional feature will never lost due to the behaviors of people.
However, there also have a lot of feature that includes both differences and similarities. The educational systems from the past to now change significantly. However, the insight meaning of the education still is the same when people always want to have the perfect educational background. Young generation recently is one of the most clearly example for the above element. Young generation in the past and new always has a lot of ambitious determine for their future when they are very hard working.
Over the past 50 years, people life change significant due to a number of reasons regarding to the development in all aspect of the life such as technologies, intellectual, cultures or behaviors. There are a lot of different in the life of people in two generation. However, the traditional culture is one of the most significant and important of the life that people should keep in order to maintain a sustainability society for the future.

Carol-

Your essay is very bad. So convoluted and doesn't convey what the topic requires. You must show the readers what are the differences and similarities between the two periods.

For instance, if you want to talk about education, you can say that back then when computers didn't exist, your parents must walk miles after miles to attend class and hand wrote all the notes and homeworks. In contrast to today, students can e-learn from anywhere as long as they have internet connection. You can participate in your professor's lectures simply by clicking on the mouse. You dont have to leave the house. You can login, download and submit your homeworks without even wasting a single sheet of paper. This is all possible due to the common usage of computers nowaday.

This is one of many examples that I'm very sure you can draw from. Hope it helps you to write a better essay.

Cheers

[english-learner]

Don't say caroly3k that she was bad in writting ! You should encourage him/her
Nên đánh giá cao sự cố gắng của người khác. Tôi bận quá chưa góp ý được thôi out đây.

[Paddy]

Recently, the life has changed significantly due to the change of the technologies around the world. From the 40s, 50s, the life seem difficult than in the 21st. Nowadays, people have more and more convenience than in the past when the development of technologies. There are a lot of similarities and differences between two period of time when compare it together.

Không nên dùng chữ recently vì đâu phải đời sống thay đổi một cách đột ngột đâu, mà nó thay đổi từ từ trong 40-50 năm qua. Chữ recently dịch là gâ`n đây, nghe không hợp lý khi nói chuyện 60 năm trước.

When one looks back in the 40's or 50's, life was much different then. Most of the differences were due to ever changing technologies, which directly altered our daily lives. However, despite the changes, there are similarities between lives in the 21st century and those in the 40s.

The technologies had been changed significantly over 50 years and leads to the differences in the life. First of all, the entertainments between two generations are different remarkable. In the past 50 years, the ways that our parent generation do for relaxing after day-working is just simple. An illustration for the entertainment in the past generation is playing in the field where likely plays in team such as football, catch butterfly, sound a trumpet. In addition, entertainment’s equipment is too simple like go fishing, swimming. However, in the 21st centuries, the way those children entertain differently such as computer game.

đừng dùng chữ change nhiều quá. Tôi dùng chữ evolve nghe cho lạ một chút không làm cho người đọc chán.

Technologies have evolved significantly over the last 50 years, which lead to a better quality of life. First of all, what people do for fun between then and now are remarkably different. In the old days, for entertainment, people would go play football, catch butterfly or play a musical instrument. For a more relaxing activitity, fishing was a favorite pastime. Nowaday, technologies have given us things like computer games.

Cái đoạn này nghe không hay lắm vì bạn phải cho nhiều thí dụ mà technology la`m cho mất đi những chuyện ngày xưa người ta làm. Con nít vẫn chơi banh, bắt bướm, câu cá như xưa vậy đâu có khác gì đâu.

One of the most important changes in the life considers two generation is the way of education.

thí dụ đâu ???

Another different between two kinds of life is the peaces and war. In the past 50 years, there are a lot of wars between countries such as Vietnam War, China War. Therefore, the life in the past seem difficult than people in these days. People in the past 50 years was not enough food for survive. An example for this is famine in 1945 in Vietnam which is the caused of million death. However, people recently, have full of service that create the happiness. Money, food, service, travel are the factor that make the most significant differences between the old and new life.

Nên nói rõ ra chết đói vì chiến tranh hay mất muà hay vì khí hậu.

The industries and agriculture in the past and recently are different when there were many impacts of the technologies. A clear example of the agriculture is the way people plant tree and harvest in the field. Recently, human activities are saving due to the use of machine when people cultivate. In fact, people recently seem lazier than people in the past when the help of the machine. However, the cultivation in the old generation was more difficult when activities in the field mainly happen by human activities.

không rõ ràng. Technology làm cho con người lười hay làm cho năng xuất cao hơn ????

Besides the differences consider revising two generation, there also exist a lot of similarities. Firstly, the culture of the communities is the most important element that human keeps from the past to now. Therefore, the most similarities consider revising two generation is the traditional culture in the communities. Even there are several changes which impact to the way people celebrate Events but the traditional feature will never lost due to the behaviors of people.

Không hiểu revising là gì cả ???

However, there also have a lot of feature that includes both differences and similarities. The educational systems from the past to now change significantly. However, the insight meaning of the education still is the same when people always want to have the perfect educational background. Young generation recently is one of the most clearly example for the above element. Young generation in the past and new always has a lot of ambitious determine for their future when they are very hard working.

thí dụ không rõ ràng

Over the past 50 years, people life change significant due to a number of reasons regarding to the development in all aspect of the life such as technologies, intellectual, cultures or behaviors. There are a lot of different in the life of people in two generation. However, the traditional culture is one of the most significant and important of the life that people should keep in order to maintain a sustainability society for the future.

Nếu tớ viết thì tớ kết luận là sự khác biệt là đời sống dễ dàng hơn nhờ technology, nhưng culture vẫn giữ như xưa.

[xautrai_satgai']

Không nên dùng chữ recently vì đâu phải đời sống thay đổi một cách đột ngột đâu, mà nó thay đổi từ từ trong 40-50 năm qua. Chữ recently dịch là gâ`n đây, nghe không hợp lý khi nói chuyện 60 năm trước.

When one looks back in the 40's or 50's, life was much different then. Most of the differences were due to ever changing technologies, which directly altered our daily lives. However, despite the changes, there are similarities between lives in the 21st century and those in the 40s.


đừng dùng chữ change nhiều quá. Tôi dùng chữ evolve nghe cho lạ một chút không làm cho người đọc chán.

Technologies have evolved significantly over the last 50 years, which lead to a better quality of life. First of all, what people do for fun between then and now are remarkably different. In the old days, for entertainment, people would go play football, catch butterfly or play a musical instrument. For a more relaxing activitity, fishing was a favorite pastime. Nowaday, technologies have given us things like computer games.

Cái đoạn này nghe không hay lắm vì bạn phải cho nhiều thí dụ mà technology la`m cho mất đi những chuyện ngày xưa người ta làm. Con nít vẫn chơi banh, bắt bướm, câu cá như xưa vậy đâu có khác gì đâu.

thí dụ đâu ???



Nên nói rõ ra chết đói vì chiến tranh hay mất muà hay vì khí hậu.


không rõ ràng. Technology làm cho con người lười hay làm cho năng xuất cao hơn ????

Không hiểu revising là gì cả ???

thí dụ không rõ ràng


Nếu tớ viết thì tớ kết luận là sự khác biệt là đời sống dễ dàng hơn nhờ technology, nhưng culture vẫn giữ như xưa.

góp ý với PADDY cái nha.
When one looks back in the 40's or 50's, life was much different then. Most of the differences were due to ever changing technologies, which directly altered our daily lives.
changes on tech, vì ý bạn là sự đổi thay về Công nghệ, không phải là Công nghệ thay đổi. hơn nữa, which thay thế cho changing tech, nó không thể thay thế- altered cho CUỘC SỐNG.
Technologies have evolved significantly over the last 50 years, which lead to a better quality of life. dùng Rel.Cl như vậy không ổn lắm, nên là Technologies, which lead to a better quality of life, have evolved significantly over the last 50 years
what people do for fun between then and now hình như không đúng là văn viết. cái này speaking thì không sao. theo mình nên sửa là : types of entertainment in the two periods are...
would go playing football, catching butterfly
For a more relaxing activitity sửa lại là for more.. hoặc là another. không dùng for a more.
mình bận chút, lần sau làm tiếp he!
mong đóng góp, thx!

[caroly3k]

Minh cam on moi nguoi da gop y cho bai viet cua minh. Vi minh moi chi hoc level 3 thoi nen trinh do rat thap, co gi minh nho cac ban sua gium phan grammar cua minh the nao? Co dat yeu cau ko? Vi day la essay notebook minh phai nop cho giao vien. Lan truoc, minh nop bai cho giao vien xem truoc, thi co bao la sai rat nhieu grammar. Gio minh rat lo lang ko biet the nao, mong moi nguoi giup do, Caroly rat cam on moi nguoi.

[xautrai_satgai']

Minh cam on moi nguoi da gop y cho bai viet cua minh. Vi minh moi chi hoc level 3 thoi nen trinh do rat thap, co gi minh nho cac ban sua gium phan grammar cua minh the nao? Co dat yeu cau ko? Vi day la essay notebook minh phai nop cho giao vien. Lan truoc, minh nop bai cho giao vien xem truoc, thi co bao la sai rat nhieu grammar. Gio minh rat lo lang ko biet the nao, mong moi nguoi giup do, Caroly rat cam on moi nguoi.

mình xin được góp ý với caroly3k nhé!
ừm, Ngữ pháp có nhiều chỗ hình như hổng đúng^^. theo mình, bạn nên kẻ dàn bài(giống như học Tập làm văn í!) bằng tiếng Anh. vì nếu dùng tiếng Việt, khi say ý, bạn sẽ rất dễ dịch từ Việt sang Anh(word by word)( chứ không phải là VIẾT BẰNG TIẾNG ANH)
bài này viết về vấn đề xã hội, theo mình không khó lắm. bạn nghĩ ý tiếng Việt, chuyển sang tiếng Anh, bạn sẽ làm được thôi mà!^^. dùng từ càng đơn giản càng tốt, dùng nhiều liên từ, sẽ hay hơn, dễ hiểu hơn.^^
nếu chưa đến hạn nộp bài, bạn kẻ dàn ý ra, post lên mạng, anh em góp ý, rồi bạn bắt đầu, vậy được không?

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