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    What is in a cigarette? There are Ammonia,Arsenic,Cadmiun,Lead, Nicotine,Vanilla,Honey,Benzene,Chocolate.All of the imgredients that contains in the cigarette can cause tenager from heart disease and lung cancer. As a teenager I am against the Michigan law od "smoke-free state".Teenager who don't smoke but are exposed to second hand smoke have a greater chance of developing heart disease, and lung cancer.Cigarettecan be a activity some teen.Some can cause the air pollution and environment. To be healthy "Soming ban will save lives."

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    Quote Originally Posted by mz_tram520 View Post
    What is in a cigarette? There are Ammonia,Arsenic,Cadmiun,Lead, Nicotine,Vanilla,Honey,Benzene,Chocolate.All of the imgredients that contains in the cigarette can cause tenager from heart disease and lung cancer. As a teenager I am against the Michigan law od "smoke-free state".Teenager who don't smoke but are exposed to second hand smoke have a greater chance of developing heart disease, and lung cancer.Cigarettecan be a activity some teen.Some can cause the air pollution and environment. To be healthy "Soming ban will save lives."
    You are against the smoke-free law which means you are for cigarette. Which side of the law are you on? Check your spelling also. Organize you paragraph into 3 parts: introduction (where you stand and why), body (proof of why smoking is bad), conclusion (Reiterate why it should be ban)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paddy View Post
    You are against the smoke-free law which means you are for cigarette. Which side of the law are you on? Check your spelling also. Organize you paragraph into 3 parts: introduction (where you stand and why), body (proof of why smoking is bad), conclusion (Reiterate why it should be ban)
    Bác Paddy ơi cái chữ đỏ là đang được sử dụng như danh từ hả ???

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    Quote Originally Posted by dethuong_x0x View Post
    Bác Paddy ơi cái chữ đỏ là đang được sử dụng như danh từ hả ???
    yes ................

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    Quote Originally Posted by Paddy View Post
    You are against the smoke-free law which means you are for cigarette. Which side of the law are you on? Check your spelling also. Organize you paragraph into 3 parts: introduction (where you stand and why), body (proof of why smoking is bad), conclusion (Reiterate why it should be ban)
    what about this, can u proof it for me ?

    As a teeenager I am disagree of the Michigan law of "smoke-free state."Cigarette can cause the air pollution and environment. In a cigrarette can contains Ammonia,Arsenic, Cadmium, Lead, Nicotine, Vanilla,Vanilla,Hone, Benzene,Chocolate.This could cause teenager from heart disease and lung cancer. As I know tha cigrarette can be a activity for some teen. Cigrarette can save a lot of teenage live. To be health"Smoking ban will save lives". This can help the environment and pollution.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mz_tram520 View Post
    what about this, can u proof it for me ?

    As a teeenager I am disagree of the Michigan law of "smoke-free state."Cigarette can cause the air pollution and environment. In a cigrarette can contains Ammonia,Arsenic, Cadmium, Lead, Nicotine, Vanilla,Vanilla,Hone, Benzene,Chocolate.This could cause teenager from heart disease and lung cancer. As I know tha cigrarette can be a activity for some teen. Cigrarette can save a lot of teenage live. To be health"Smoking ban will save lives". This can help the environment and pollution.
    What does Michigan law say? to me smoke-free state means no more smoking in Michigan. If this is the case then your stand (you don't want smoke free Michigan, in other words, you support smoking) contradicts with your proof. The last sentence (environmental issue) is irrelevant to the issue at hand: smoke is bad for your body.

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