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    Does this sentence sound English/American style?

    "Learning is similar to rowing a boat upstream. If you cannot travel forward(s), you must be go backward(s)"
    Or
    "Learning/Studying is compared to rowing a boat upstream. It must be go downstream if not travel upstream'


    Which sounds better? and your own sentence?

    Thank a lot in advance

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    Quote Originally Posted by english-learner View Post
    Thank you very much for your help. I'm a math-teacher so it's very helpful.

    btw: You write "different speed" but in American I've read they write "distinct speed"
    In addition, in some math-web, I recognize " uniform speed", "constant speed" I think uniform speed and constant speed are the same meanings. Is it right?


    Anyway, I think:

    It took a canoe 4 hours to travel downstream from A to B and 5 hours to go upstream from B to A
    This is written correctly. "uniform" and "constant" Gramtically they have the same meaning. When talking about "speed" -- constant speed is used most.

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    I need to translate into English a mathematical sentence that makes me confused, who can help?

    1.Let H be the foot of the altitude from A to BC
    2.Let H be the foot of the right-angled line drawn from A to BC
    3.Let H be the right-angled projection of A to BC


    What sentence is right?
    If they are all right, what sentence is the most popular used?
    Last edited by english-learner; 07-09-2010 at 06:14 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by english-learner View Post
    I need to translate into English a mathematical sentence that makes me confused, who can help?

    1.Let H be the feet of the altitude from A to BC
    2.Let H be the feet of the right-angled line drawn from A to BC
    3.Let H be the right-angled projection of A to BC


    What sentence is right?
    If they are all right, what sentence is the most popular used?
    Number 2 and 3 are little confused for me... I like number 1 better but I would like to fix it a little bit:

    Let H be the intercept point of the altitude from A to BC.
    Nhất tự vi sư , bán tự vi sư
    ---
    1st Version:
    Anyone who teaches me one word - even half a word - is still my teacher.
    2nd Version:
    Even he who teaches me the smallest bit can still be called my teacher

    Please correct my grammar as you see fit. Much appreciated!

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    Quote Originally Posted by english-learner View Post
    I need to translate into English a mathematical sentence that makes me confused, who can help?

    1.Let H be the feet of the altitude from A to BC
    2.Let H be the feet of the right-angled line drawn from A to BC
    3.Let H be the right-angled projection of A to BC


    What sentence is right?
    If they are all right, what sentence is the most popular used?
    In math terms, A is usually meant a point & BC is a segment.
    Base on your sentences, here is what I get.
    1.Let H be the feet of the altitude from A to BC
    My interpretation:
    A
    |
    |
    |
    |
    H |
    _____|___________
    B C

    2.Let H be the feet of the right-angled line drawn from A to BC
    My interpretation:
    A
    |
    |
    |
    |
    |__________
    B H C

    3.Let H be the right-angled projection of A to BC [I’m not sure what you meant in this sentence, especially the projection part]
    My interpretation:
    A
    |\
    | \
    | \
    | \ H
    | \
    |______\
    B C
    FYI – for the above right triangle, the sides are called as:
    AB is the height
    BC is the base
    And AC is the Hypotenuse

    So now back to your questions

    What sentence is right?
    All 3 are correctly stated, i'm not sure what you are looking for

    If they are all right, what sentence is the most popular used?
    I don’t know how to answer that, since all 3 sentences are different!

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