Plz help to translate to english

[m0ney]

Thưa các ông, hiện nay tôi rất hoang mang không hiểu chuyện gì xảy ra.

Sáng nay, tôi đã chuyển 260$ vào tài khoản ngân hàng và thực hiện việc mua hosting của các ông hết 230$ bây giờ chỉ còn 30$ trong tài khoản ngân hàng của tôi. Những hình ảnh ID, Passport, Credit Card và Screen shoot tài khoản ngân hàng online mà các ông yêu cầu gửi để verify tôi đã gửi đủ cả, vậy mà giờ tôi vẫn chưa nhận được hosting tôi đã mua.

Tôi phải làm gì bây giờ thưa các ông ?

[laura]

Dear sirs, I'm very anxious and don't understand what happened.
This morning, I deposited 260$ into my bank account and payed 230$ to purchase your hosting and there is only 30$ in my bank account. I sent all pictures (ID, Passport, Credit and my bank account’s screen shoot) about order for payment to you when you asked. But now I still receive my hosting which I purchased from you.
I want to get an answer from you.
(Theo tôi "tôi muốn có được câu trả lời từ các ông" có lẽ hợp lý hơn là "tôi phải làm gì bây giờ thưa các ông", vì hỏi như vậy thì nó dễ lơ hơn

[thainam2k]

This is a formal request.
I could see something wrong in laura's version.
+260$ --> should be $260
+payed --> should be paid
+deposit may not be used preposition "into". I don't know whether it is right or wrong but I could not find the preposition "into" using with the verb deposit.
+I still receive my hosting --> should be corrected.

Here's my version:
Dear Mr, I'm very confused now and do not understand what happened.
This morning, I just deposited $260 in my bank account and purchased your hosting for $230. There is now only left $30 in my bank account.The picture ID, Passport, Credit Card and Screen shoot online bank account which sent to verify my request was enough. And now I have not received my purchase hosting.
I want to get answer from you.
Thanks and best regards.(Câu này trong phần yêu cầu dịch không có nhưng đây là bức thư lịch sự nên thêm vào)

[The Interpreter]

Formal requests start with:

To whom this may concern

[laura]

This is a formal request.
I could see something wrong in laura's version.
+260$ --> should be $260
+payed --> should be paid
+deposit may not be used preposition "into". I don't know whether it is right or wrong but I could not find the preposition "into" using with the verb deposit.
+I still receive my hosting --> should be corrected.

Here's my version:
Dear Mr, I'm very confused now and do not understand what happened.
This morning, I just deposited $260 in my bank account and purchased your hosting for $230. There is now only left $30 in my bank account.The picture ID, Passport, Credit Card and Screen shoot online bank account which sent to verify my request was enough. And now I have not received my purchase hosting.
I want to get answer from you.
Thanks and best regards.(Câu này trong phần yêu cầu dịch không có nhưng đây là bức thư lịch sự nên thêm vào)

Thank you very much.