Originally Posted by
kutron
this is 3 parts of body esay,anyone who can help me check puntuation, grammar and structure. thank you so much.
Firstly, Traditional dress between Vietnam and Canada are differences several ways such as styles and dressing which are depended onaccording to ( deleted) ages, gender and regions. In Vietnam, people who are like traditional styles belong to middle-aged and elders.(it seems awkward to me so I correct it) In Vietnam, middle-aged people like traditional clothing. Because of their feature of day-work (deleted) the (hot/cold/inconvenient/whole day...) working condition, Middle-aged people wear simple clothes, such as T-shirts with pants. They also wear this kind of clothes when they trade at the markets. T-Shirts may have cotton woods or embroideries. With to elders, people who are between 50 – 60 ages, or have original from China (this is not a full sentence). They are still influenced by traditional custom ancient -> ancient custom(I dont think u need 'ancient' here). Because they usually stay at home to look after their grandchildren, they like to wear simple clothes for everyday use(deleted) everyday. In contrast to Vietnam, Canada does not have traditional or national as such (I dont get what you mean) . The styles of traditional costume belong to Aboriginal, first nation people(?) and Inuit. They are these first person came to Canada from remote past (You dont need this sentence because you already wrote it right at the previous sentence). The clothing among native people varies in both style and raw material. Besides styles, dressing according to (deleted)is depended on ages, gender and regions between (deleted) Vietnam and Canada have some of (deleted) several other differences. Dressing in Vietnam differs in Southern and Northern. For southern, in the cities, young girls and many women still wear national dress, Ao Dai, in parties and weeding ceremonies. Different to southern, women wear Ao Tu Than with sandals of old tire rubber(I dont get it, dép lào = flip-flop, guốc = wooden shoe) in celebrations. Unlike to Vietnam, as already said, traditional costumes in Canada belong to Aboriginal, first nation people and Inuit. Inuit and other native people have their own highly developed traditional wear that is made of leather skins (deleted) and furs.
In addition to traditional dress, another difference between Vietnam and Canada are contemporary fashion. In Vietnam, contemporary fashion is influenced by social; it is always Changes quickly day by day. Especially, Adults and teenagers usually change fashion styles, they like to buy clothes in the fashion shop on the stress. These clothing are produced by China, Korea, and other Asia. The main causes are influenced by serials on television. Nowadays, many serials on Vietnamese’s television every day, these are produced from different countries such as China, Korea, Hong Kong and so on. The dressing of beautiful actors or actresses influences many Adults and Teenagers, and they want to follow the fashion styles of characters in the film. On the other hand, the fashion clothing of Canadians follows Europeans and Americans.(I'm missing this part because I have no idea hic hic I will continue later if anyone has any ideas , thanks so much)