this is my cover letter. Right now, I'm applying part-time job on the internet, anyone who can help me check my cover letter, is it ok or I need to fix something in cover letter. Thank you for helping me a lot.

Dear Sis/Madam,

I'm writing to apply for cashier at shoppersdrugmart.ca, which I see on the website http://jobbanks.gc.ca. currently, I have been working at Calgary Flame, which is position cocession cashier. I hope that I can join working with the team at shoppersdrugmart.

Right now, I'm a student at SAIT. I want to look for a job permanent, so it can support my life while I'm studying at SAIT. I hope that My expeerience in cashier includes hard working and responsibility could do good job for you.

Thank your for your time and consideration. If you are interested in interview me. Please! you can contact me at number .... I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,

Tam Ta